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NIGHT SHADOWS:
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Torment In the room that glows with moonlight
He sits in the corner frightened
Shadows of the night surround him
Screams of fright escape him
Scared he crawls toward the light
Shadows spread and lengthen
Reaching for the boy
He whimpers and shakes with terror
Shadows grip him consuming him
As he cries in agony
Hope leaves him
Then
The lights come on
Very good, kinda made me go
Very good, kinda made me go back to my childhood years and my fears of the "monsters under the bed" and the nightmares that it brought me.
lol very well described. Keep writing. :)
-Elfy*
Thank you
Thank you, that was so what I was going for. I will keep writing hopefully, I keep doing a good job lol
A. Smith
With Lines Like That
you can not fail us ever! Gave me shivers and the last line nailed me to the wall...Welcome to pp ~~A~~
Awesome!
That piece was so much fun to write! I have loved poetry that just shocks you with it's ending and this piece was my interruption of that. I am pleased to see that I suceeded!
A. Smith