Writing it down.

The tonal qualities

of words

Lost

...written...

...bitten....

Off!

Excuse me when

I cough

"Cough!"


Knockin' the spew loose,

Knocked the screw loose,

Hear me SHOUT!?

did I get the word out?

Right!

That to live is to Fight!..

for breath

'til there's nothing left...

theft- of the Point.

BUT

Here's the point,

Exclamation points!!!!don't point.

 

Talk to me, you can

by note or by letter,

even better,

to my face.

my words are a thoughtful journey, friend,

and never ever a race.




 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

explaining my words

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Exclamation Explaination

When I draw an exclamation point, I say it in my head or out lous as I make the down stroke

"E X-C L A- M A Y-S H U N" and then I add the dot and said "P O I N T" - I'm just sayin' :D