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Funny Fair
Funny Fair
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Brain sat on a see saw
Head on merry-go-round
Soul flew higher and higher
And shattered on the ground
©bishu
Author's Notes/Comments:
Pen working overtime 
Funny Fair
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Brain sat on a see saw
Head on merry-go-round
Soul flew higher and higher
And shattered on the ground
©bishu
Pen working overtime
Wow! It's like a very grim
Wow! It's like a very grim and unsettling nursery rhyme. Brilliant. :)
Ohhhh ... Peter you seem to flatter my slippery post
Ohhhh ... Peter you seem to flatter my slippery post
In the real big world you are my dost (Dost in Hindi means friend)
©bishu
Funny Fair.
My Friend may your pen work overtime with these tiny couplets. If couplets is the righr expression Bern. Smiling as always.
Thank you ever so much Dear Respected Friend Mr Bern far away
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I love the duality! Playful, but with depth! Awesome, my Friend!
Frankly & truthfully Mr Sir Beavis I don't know where was the
Thank you ever so much for your valuable read my friend
Frankly & truthfully Mr Sir Beavis I don't know where was the depth ?? I think I wrote about its birth in a "Reply to Comment " on this page itself !! 
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;-)
One of the beautiful things about poetry is that others may find far more or many different things in your words than you ever imagined! ;-)
Dear Respected Sir Mr Beavis my friend
Dear Respected Sir Mr Beavis my friend.I had imagined in my head a children's playground with a see-saw , merry-go-round ,swings, etc. Then the words floated in.
Thank you once again for your valuable time and extreme kindness. ~bishu~
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Dear Shattered Soul
over-time working poet-soul, please work over-time more often. Haikuesque, dude. This is really fine - Allets
Respected Madam Allets ... This is too much !!!!!! Give the othe
Respected Madam Allets ... This is too much !!!!!! Give the others a chance to happiness of your kind comments.I had bought a paperback novel in July "The Bancroft Tragedy" -Robert Ludlum & was just settling down to start reading it after returning from the grocers and umbrella repair shop. Suddenly the first three lines floated into my mind and I penned them down.While writing I somehow put in a fourth line to rhyme.I may be wrong but Haiku is 3 liner that's what I learnt from PP about a couple of years back. Enough for now. More tomorrow~BM
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