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Ruined Gems
Ruined Gems in Garbage Heaps
Rubble heaps midst herded sheep
Chaos of heavy people,loud people
Serenely wafting thru faceless crowds
Eyes to the sky above the lofty clouds
Devils abound clad in human shrouds
Mortgaged minds,ape-like manners
Glued to books- brandishing banners
Nevr the stars which in sky shimmers
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I love the imagery. :)
I love the imagery. :)
Thank you Respected Mr P Christopher for your kind read
Thank you Respected Mr P Christopher for your kind read & positive feedback.
©bishu
interesting
very interesting little ditty you did here. short, but intense lines. playing on the mind's emotions and visual allurre.
OMG ! OMG ! OMG !!!!!!! Respected Mm Poetic_eyes
OMG ! OMG ! OMG !!!!!!! Respected Mm Poetic_eyes.Your comment was worth millions.Thanx so much.
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Pretty good. I don't quite
Pretty good. I don't quite grasp all the imagery but I'll have to spend a little more time on it. Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Amidst the rotting multitudes real gems are lost
Amidst the rotting multitudes real gems are lost.That is all I had to say Respected SS.Thank you very very much for your time for my humble post.
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