Last Journey

Still,cold,stiff body draped in new white

Bloated from long hours waiting

Never smelt a sweet-smelling 'rajanigandha' wreath

Never had sniffed the expensive incense burning

Carried on weary shoulders... heavy hearts


It was only in the morning he was human

Gossiping merrily nibbling snacks sipping tea

Loved ones,friends looked at his handsome form

Curly,dark hair-- unlimited zest for living

Fair to himself..his family..never asking,always giving


He had allergy to Gods and godmen pictures

Though learned..he didn't believe in scriptures

Hated funeral processions,incense, wreaths

The new carrying-cot seemed to ridicule

his living beliefs which he never learnt at school



©bishu

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A wreath of white words on white page written unseen by the departed.

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Wordman's picture

How wonderful a write, I felt

How wonderful a write, I felt like I knew this man.

You write as well with your accent as most do using perfect english. Well done.

cevance's picture

Very interesting read, bishu.

Very interesting read, bishu. Death will eventually find us all and our last farewell will be determined by those around us. Perhaps they'll just sweep me under the nearest rug. I like this.