Swallow

Swallow perched on the lone tree top

Mother pleaded " Be careful, you may drop"

"I won't drop , I won't fall, I know how to fly"

Tiny swallow spread its tiny wings and flew up high

Fluttering its wings ,excitement reigns the ignorant

Mother's heart skipped a beat --- she thought....

"How happy is the mother of the calf grazing 

Four feet firmly set on land...

Alas ! my baby has only two skinny legs

But she looks more elegant than tiny eggs"

Mother swallow spied the butterfly

"The butterfly is prettier than my only baby

Just can't believe it was once a caterpillar

I wish my baby was a butterfly- I would be proud"

Mother looked up .... baby was out of view!

"Maybe time has come for her to bid adieu"

Then the drizzle came.. the sun hid and smiled

Smiling with seven colours before the pot of gold

A tiny dark speck came to view

Baby swallow flew happily to its mother

"You are my lovely darling" with kisses began to smother




© Bishwanath Mukherjee




Author's Notes/Comments: 

Probably its the same with humans. No comparison between two human beings. It is how things are made to be............ The perfect balance. Ugly and beautiful are just a matter of perception. A mother's love for her child....... immeasurable scale. Simply a thought.

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Very charming poem! The

Very charming poem! The subject would also make a very nice short story.

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Thanx Respected Vance

Thanx Respected Vance


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pretty marvelous poem you got

pretty marvelous poem you got there, enjoyed it deeply :)

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Thanx CXNation

Thanx CXNation


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Oh, Bishu!!  Your sweetness

Oh, Bishu!!  Your sweetness is so appreciated!! I LOVE this!  SmileSmile


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Big smiley

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I Like Yr Style

It will be interesting to see where internalized rhyming mixed with end rhyme leads, evolves, and when it breaks wide open there will be miracles ~Allets~