Melting Candy
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Hopes and sweet expectations
Year candy has shed its flab
Now it is a razor sharp sliver
Sawing the tongue with bruises
Soon in five day's time
No candy in the mouth
The sweet taste,scratched
Tongue eagerly waits
For a fresh new candy
Five Day Candy
A kid's dream sweet. But sucking it until it melts down to a slither that cuts the tongue is universal, especially for hard candy. Cool writings these.
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Thank you for letting me read my own post once again
©bishu