If you call

10am, waiting on your call.

11am, waiting, anticipating your call

12pm, waiting, anticipating, debating if your going to call.

1pm, waiting, anticipating, debating on the possible conversation, if you call.

2pm, waiting, anticipating, debating on the possible conversation of dating, if you call.

3pm, waiting, anticipating, debating on the possible conversation of dating with the hopes of creating a new relation, if you call.

4pm, waiting, anticipating, debating on the possible conversation of dating with the hopes of creating a new relation, while dealing with the fustration of not receiving your call!

4:05pm. Hello...... No you didn't keep me waiting.....naw.. I just got home myself.

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Gary Mills's picture

Time is the great betrayer of man, keeping up with it for one who captures our imagination, well, then we are twice betrayed. Excellent work, and right "on time".

Brook B's picture

Very true and very cute. Brillant my friend!

CHRISTIE FELTY's picture

LOL. YOU ARE TOO MUCH.SMOOTH.

Azure Bijou's picture

Thanks for your kind words...They were very encouraging to a new member. I have lots more poetry, I will start posting some more.

I loved this one of yours! I love poetry I can feel, relate to and this one did it for me! Gosh I was just there yesterday!

This one really is brilliant!!

Mary Jane's picture

LMAO...was that all you were thinking...hehee...j/k I thought that was way cool!.. Late,"important" calls are downright miserable!

Hidden Illusion's picture

LOL! That poem was hella funny! Well, its true anyway!! lol keep writing!

~ Hidden Illusion ~