Easter.

Opened toed sandals

The sharp points of spears ,

A terrified young man

Mind full of fears.



The bitterness of the Suns rays,



Old iron nails hammered in to flesh and wood

A crown of thorns made up for a king

Who’s reign was short and so misunderstood.



That slow lingering death

Although not alone,

A thief at each side

On  his high wooden throne.



Those last immortal words

Handed down through all time

We all stand forgiven

Of all of Mans crimes..



Faith it is wanted

And needed right now

For it is Easter



But we all disavow..



For though we are Christians

And to God we all beg..



Oh stuff this religion..



Just buy me an Egg!

The bigger the better

Filled with big bars,

Am a chocolate go getter.



The true spirit of Easter,

(Now don’t get so cross)

Is called Easter Eggs

Covered in chocolate sauce.



What?








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S74RW4RD's picture

There is a line in the movie, Dirty Dancing, "When I'm wrong, I say I'm wrong." That line often comes back to haunt me, as it does in this particular case regarding the comment I posted above. I totally misunderstood the poem. It might be clearer, however, if quotation marks ofset the lines starting at "Oh stuff . . ." and then running on down to the conclusion. It is definitely a change in voice, or else the authorial voice is quoting an overheard comment (at least it appears so in my second, and more humble, reading of the poem). Again, I apologize for my previous, and stupidly incorrect, comment posted last night.


Starward

S74RW4RD's picture

Your lack of respect, however politely expressed, for the Holy Festival of Easter speaks far more of you than of Easter. The failure of some Christians to disavow is no more a disparagement of Easter than a bad poem is a disparagement of the poet's intrinsic worth as a human being.


Starward