The words I wrote are not my thoughts
using my mind as medium to shape form,
fragile vihicles to carry subtle self expression
I am sharing the essence of myself.
My expression is the visible outlet of my existence
much more than advertising thoughts or words
instruments and tools I might use to express
not being identified that much to loose myself.
Receive what you allow to be reflected by yourself
I am not expecting anything to be given back
no nice and well aducated words, not even 'thanks'
don't feel offended, either stay with words or thoughts.
Try to permit that what is waiting to come together
using the Internet to connect beyond yourself
leave behind quarrels of selfdefending personalities
fighting for satisfaction through selfconfirmation.
Let us abandon those playgrounds of kindergardens
to get to fields of creation, joy and good feelings
through self expression and gentle subtle charing
finding and being what we where longing since ever...
BeiYin
5.Nov.96
I really enjoyed this piece....wonderful writing.
These are strong & wise words... It is something that hopefully will be heard by those who will read this piece. Nicely done.Very intelligent. Amy
Gentle is the night♥
I am pleased the 'top ten' is back, it was one way for me to be introduced to some of the writers on Postpoems that I missed...This piece gave me a bit of inspiration...so thank you for that, also, congratulations on the 'top ten'. i am sure that your work will be well received...i will read more.
Bei Yin, I really enjoyed this piece, as well. I agree. We have this resource availabl to us, we need to shed the attitudes, and enjoy it for all that it has to offer. Ilove the line about a kindergarten playground, very fitting at times. A clever and thought-provoking piece of work. Thanks for posting!