Don't Look Down.
It is tricky up here
where the air is thin;
fingers loose feeling
from the cold as
one toe, one foot,
inching in front of the other.
Hold on tight,
and remember,
Don't Look Down,
I'm always here
and the mirror
in my hand
reflects
what others see.
:) <3
don't look down its tricky up here! best and worst things said to encompass love! and life and the world according to a poet :)
Much Love
Ashley
;-)
it always tricky in thin air ;-)
indeed...
unless you are a Yeti.....
Much Love
Ashley
A yeti named Yoda ;-)
a yeti, Yoda... Perspective ;-)
nahhh
then you are laughed at and teased for being tiny and green
Much Love
Ashley
;-)
only once! ;-)
Not Looking Down
cuz u said not to. The mirror reflecting is nicely placed in the poem, just where it should be, at the clencher spot. Nice write. Lady A
:-D
Greatly appreciated, Lady A!!! That means a lot to me! Wanted to pen something worthy and appropriate for that folder ;-)
You Suceeded
Lost Horizons is an old movie about climbers finding Shangri-La. This poem reminded me that I loved that movie, as a kid. If I saw it now, no fx, no dialog worth spit, I'd wonder what I saw in it. I will never have that problem with this poem - just reread and it is magic ~slc
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