Down Time

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Sitting here, 

catching my breath,

jotting down lines

to clear my head,

I thought a bat

had crapped 

on my notebook,

only to realize

it was blood

in my eye

that blurred

my view.

 
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running_with_rabbits's picture

<3

in my mind this about when Batman took the fall for Harvey Dent and it was beautiful! (its written in the perspective of the citizans of course, blood in their eye being that for batman which is why they saw bat crap) 

 

seriosuly though, it does get down and intune with the cynical side of life, and highlights how quick we (the cynical) leap to the crappy explination!


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

;-)

cynical, me??? 

running_with_rabbits's picture

noooo

never! ;)


Much Love

Ashley

allets's picture

Ouch!

Talk about misdirection - incredibly vivid and color filled ending - Lady A Surprised

 

 


 

 

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;-)

Thank you Lady A! You are an inspiration!  (And I hope you like brown & red ;-)