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Seven Bridges

All I could say is, "fuck it!"

I spent the night 

stalking through the woods,

seeking solace or comfort 

in the company of the moon;

but I knew

when I sat on the veranda

and caught the smell

of a blackberry cobbler

at 3 O'clock in the morning -

I knew 

that my quest

had been in vain

and the answers I sought

awaited within.

 
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I like. 

I like. 

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Thank you!

Thank you!

running_with_rabbits's picture

<3

I feel like it ends abrumptly, or maybe more so transitions abrumptly...that being said, I love the way it shows the need to be wild and free with the need to settle and make a home :)


Much Love

Ashley

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;-)

It definately needed editing. (I've barely had time to write, much less polish lately ;-( but I'm glad you could see where I was heading. Cleaned it up a bit, so hopefully, it reads a little better ;-)

running_with_rabbits's picture

:)

either its the edits to the poem or myself but now I just feel it more

 

perhaps this is a convo best left for PM


Much Love

Ashley

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Always look within.....

Always look within.....


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;-)

Indeed! ;-) thanks, my friend!