All I could say is, "fuck it!"
I spent the night
stalking through the woods,
seeking solace or comfort
in the company of the moon;
but I knew
when I sat on the veranda
and caught the smell
of a blackberry cobbler
at 3 O'clock in the morning -
I knew
that my quest
had been in vain
and the answers I sought
awaited within.
I like.
I like.
Thank you!
Thank you!
<3
I feel like it ends abrumptly, or maybe more so transitions abrumptly...that being said, I love the way it shows the need to be wild and free with the need to settle and make a home :)
Much Love
Ashley
;-)
It definately needed editing. (I've barely had time to write, much less polish lately ;-( but I'm glad you could see where I was heading. Cleaned it up a bit, so hopefully, it reads a little better ;-)
:)
either its the edits to the poem or myself but now I just feel it more
perhaps this is a convo best left for PM
Much Love
Ashley
Always look within.....
Always look within.....
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;-)
Indeed! ;-) thanks, my friend!