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Escape Velocity
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30 years in a Hole I hold so many things
within my memory,
my soul, my self
and steadily,
the weight
slows the revolving
of my life,
but as the gravity gathers
and my grip lessens,
like a skater
pulling in my arms,
the rotation increases,
the world blurs
from the spin,
and I am flung into that
Fortress of Solitude.
I think this poem is perfect
I think this poem is perfect and I love it. Bu t you already knew that ;) hugss beautifully rendered and very deserving of a Standing BRAVO! With whistle and cheer!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
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A special poem to me, so Supermassive HUGSS!!!
:)
I think this poem is perfectly titled
Wish my escape vilocity was in better shape these days
Much Love
Ashley
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Me too;-) it could probably be improved on, but I think I frames the need to remain with the situation until the need to separate simply becomes greater than any desire can overcome ;-)
I wish that too Dear. Love ya ;-)
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I'm learnign though :)
Much Love
Ashley
About The Title
I AGREE with Rabbit Who Lets Us Run With All - I love iceskating in the Olympics - they get extra points for not "traveling" - the circle made by blade on ice must be small and perfect and fast and unroaming - nice image. ~a~
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Lady A!!! This is so perfect with the poem! "the circle made by blade on ice must be small and perfect and fast". I tip my hat to the talented & classy Lady A!!!