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The more I've seen, 

the more I think,

the more I write

of what we are capable of,

the more convinced I become

that love, life, and beauty

are exceptional creations,

but somehow not ours,

simply things we can only perceive

as Plato's shadows,

and that our existence 

consists of the droppings

of some disinterested deity.

And then, 

as I sit with you 

in the stillness 

of the morning,

sipping coffee and watching the ducks

an unspoken communion of mutual faith

beyond either of our understanding

settles within my soul

and I am comfortably confused again.

 

 

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Moonshadow's picture

You're really something else

You're really something else beavis! This is incredibly beautiful! Love this! MS 


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

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;-)

Thanks!

Poetic_Eyes's picture

Love it

Love it Mr. Beavis.

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;-)

Thank you!!!

nightlight1220's picture

Love it, and

Love it, and yes... 

 

information comes in,

information goes out,

bits and pieces of thoughts 

caressing queries and doubts,

minding my business,

and wasting my time,

life is my muse abour how where and whys,

halfway to the bottom,

but close to the top,

if i figure this out,

may as well close up shop!!

 

~peace~loved it~


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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;-)

Thank and it love your response!

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) I love being comfortably

:) I love being comfortably confused..it just makes life ;)


Much Love

Ashley

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:-D

Indeed it does Dear:-)

SSmoothie's picture

Wow! Just wow!  And this just

Wow! Just wow! 

And this just blew me away!

*"and I am comfortably confused again"*

one of favourites so far! Bravo! Hugss! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

allets's picture

Exquisite Writing

diety's droppings - wonderful POV! Engaging beginning, wowed in between and the ending is priceless - really liked the ending - ~Lady A~