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FTW was your mantra,
so true you had it
tattooed on your right hand.
"Turn the other cheek",
as a counterweight
on your left arm.
But too often, for too many,
both cheeks got turned,
without remorse.
Did the world turn on you,
or you on the world?
For in the end,
the world has truly
fucked you,
without even
spitting on your
cold asshole.

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©1 November 2012 - 5:48am — Beavis
3 February 2013 - 11:26am — Affirmation (not verified)
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simple flow, words, yet

simple flow, words, yet striking especially near the end. I like the fact you don't rely on rhyming for each verse.

 

27 March 2013 - 2:13pm — Beavis
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Thank you ;-)

Thank you ;-)

14 November 2012 - 5:34am — ashes_theartofb...
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Pfft!

"For in the end,
the world has truly
fucked you,
without even
spitting on your
cold asshole."

Laughing so hard that I cannot even leave you something proper.

((ROFL))

"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

22 November 2012 - 2:54pm — Beavis
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;-)

At least I made you smile ;-)

3 November 2012 - 10:06pm — running_with_rabbits
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wow a seccond poem by you

wow a seccond poem by you that I am not a big fan of, though I did love the lines about did the world turn the back on them or visa versa

Much Love

Ashley

8 November 2012 - 2:37pm — Beavis
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I thought this one might not

I thought this one might not ring your bell. Hugs, my Dear;-)

8 November 2012 - 3:59pm — running_with_rabbits
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you know me too well

you know me too well

Much Love

Ashley

22 November 2012 - 2:49pm — Beavis
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;-)

And that is indeed, my pleasure! ;-)

6 December 2012 - 5:36pm — Beavis
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;-)

Having read your poem "Toronto" this is just a closer look at one view of "Toronto" with everything striped away ;-)

6 December 2012 - 5:37pm — running_with_rabbits
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:) you are my fav Beavis!

:) you are my fav Beavis!

Much Love

Ashley

6 December 2012 - 5:42pm — Beavis
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;-)

And no one who mattered looked... not there was anyone left :-(

6 December 2012 - 5:43pm — running_with_rabbits
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god I still love this line

god I still love this line "Did the world turn on you, or you on the world?" :)

Much Love

Ashley

1 November 2012 - 10:20pm — RoC
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Without even

the courtesy of a reach-around.....tsk tsk

"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

8 November 2012 - 2:37pm — Beavis
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;-)

;-)

1 November 2012 - 10:04pm — SSmoothie
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Excellent!hugss

Excellent!hugss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

8 November 2012 - 2:40pm — Beavis
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Thank you Dear!!!

Thanks for the support and encouragement and always holding my hand in the dark! Love ya!!!