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Your are the beat of my heart;
not the opening and closing of the valves,
but the flow of my soul,
the pulse of my mind,
the rhythm of my life,
and it's too worn to say
I can't live without you,
but we all know how well those
artificial heart stories always end.

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This is my new fav poem by

This is my new fav poem by you, I so get this


Much Love

Ashley

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;-)

There is no greater praise! My turn to smile like a fool! ;-)

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:-)

:-)


Much Love

Ashley

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Simply wonderful!

Simply wonderful! Breathtaking! Love this! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Artificial heart stories...

Artificial heart stories... You have tremendous insights my dear friend this poem has me reeling! I still can't get it out of my head! So many deep, dark, and real interpretations, it's that just going along faking it time between intimate connections or that one night stand... You are brilliant B I love the way you intrigue me! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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I like this one too! Thank

I like this one too! Thank you Dearest! HugSs!!!

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James _

The line about not being able to live without you blew me away! - Ha and not so ha too - Great poem, for many of us afuture - Lady A


 

 

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Many thanks, sweet Lady A ;-)

Many thanks, sweet Lady A ;-)