In the Dragon's Mouth

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30 years in a Hole

In the Dragon's Mouth,

each time

a single step,

forward or back,

left or right,

simply standing still,

changes you forever.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

Yup it's confirmed...I still

Yup it's confirmed...I still love this poem!


Much Love

Ashley

LovingLovelace's picture

I realize I am a little late

I realize I am a little late on the commenting, but I like this a lot.

Love,
LovingLovelace


If your mirror doesn't find you one of the most beautiful people it has ever seen, punch it and find a better mirror.

Beavis's picture

Thank you twice !!!

Not only are you not late, but you are just in time! I just noticed something, thanks to your comment ;-) Thank you twice !!!

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) I am posting this on my

:) I am posting this on my wall beside my bed, gonna read it every time I miss you know who then go find me a better man :P


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

;-)

An excellent plan!

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) why thank you

:) why thank you


Much Love

Ashley

lovemesomejunk's picture

How true. Our actions do

How true. Our actions do start our paths. We can only blame ourselves for the roads we travel. The only way to change is to go Right and then go straight.

Beavis's picture

Indeed! Thanks!

Indeed! Thanks!

allets's picture

Steps Anywhere

I enjoyed this poem, a comment on the essence of change and direction, the impact of air on history and motion - nicely condensed wisdom, philisophically Eastern in tone ~~~i.e. a journey of a thousnad miles begins with the first step - Confu - allets


 

 

Beavis's picture

Greatly appreciated!

Greatly appreciated!

SSmoothie's picture

How the hell do you do it?

How the hell do you do it? Think like this? Write like this? Mesmerizing full of surprises, pure adage at its best this one is sure to be a fridge magnet! Awesome !M


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

Thank you dear!

I have no idea ;-) my mother always said I had mental diarrhea ;-)

allets's picture

Freudian too!

Amentalconditionknownasgeniousmentorrolemodelwithfoodforthoughtpoisoningandadose ofpoetenvy...I apologize, that was uso ncalled for (smilezzz) ~~~~~allets


 

 

Beavis's picture

LMAO!!!

LMAO!!! She just said too often I couldn't control the thoughts spewing out my mouth;-)

allets's picture

Though Amouth

I read a lot as a kid, mother just kept calling me smart...I didn't talk much until Freshman year, not the best time to spew...so now I write it down and send it out into the universe as corectly speled as prossibble...allets


 

 

Beavis's picture

LMAO!

LMAO!