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Sweet surrender, subtle
subjugation of all that you
are to the will of another.
Unbound, you bare your soul
to one who devours life and love.
All that you are, all that you can be,
all that you may become,
mean nothing. Irrelevance reigns supreme;

except to the poppies,
who grow in the field,
untended, and
all the more
beautiful
for that lack.

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©17 December 2011 - 3:32am — Beavis
22 December 2011 - 1:27pm — running_with_rabbits
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thanks for the share

I didn't know you knew me so well (jks)
seriouly though this was an enjoyable read, perhaps because it hit home, perhaps because the words just seem to flowfrom one-another like waterfalls on the same river, perhaps because of all that aliteration at the start, who knows, it was just enjoyable love

Much Love

Ashley

22 December 2011 - 3:28pm — Beavis
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Thanks! It means a lot that

Thanks! It means a lot that you connected with this. It was a special piece for me as well.

22 December 2011 - 7:04pm — running_with_rabbits
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Beavis my dear it was like

Beavis my dear it was like you had followed me arround from the ageof 13 on and then wrote this about me, I really enjoyed it :)

Much Love

Ashley

21 December 2011 - 8:04am — Fitzgerald
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You're a great writer.

You're a great writer. Awesome

17 December 2011 - 5:48am — SSmoothie
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Been there done that, I

Been there done that, I really can Identify with the filled zombie like state of the poppies addictive affective and lost in the beauty of being seductively used... This is my kinda walk through Oz -thanks.

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

2 June 2012 - 9:11am — SSmoothie
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for those curious ones

;)

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

17 December 2011 - 5:23am — GSNJSMJ
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Wow I am so lost

but in a great way, I must say. It is always magical to read a poem that you cant quite understand but continue to ponder its meaning as you scroll your eyes about it again and again, carefully examining each line and trying to strip some correct fathoming of its meaning. Its not to often I read something that makes me really think, and this has done just that. well done

still im attempting to understand this piece
I love when this happens!

 

Ascesa e rialzarsi fino a quando gli agnelli diventano leoni

Rise and Rise again until Lambs become lions