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Flashback Fridays Dark curtains cover our indulgences
as heat scents the stirring air and
rhythmic music covers the sounds
of our lustful frolic.
We are lost within those moments,
careless of reign or realm,
seeking only that casual release
of comfortable friends, unless;
your downcast eyes,
the soft catch in your breath,
the quiver of your lip,
the words unspoken,
mean this is no longer easy
or free of cares.
NICE!
you captured that moment between two friends fuckin,when one realises that the other is no longer a friend fucking, PERFECTLY! I also love how you kind of leave it open, there is no way to tell which person is falling in-love with the other and which person still wants a fuck buddy.
I love this poem!
Much Love
Ashley
You are such a mind reader!
You always see right through me ;-)
:) its cause I love ya! also
:) its cause I love ya!
also isn't room 151 the room in 1984 where they take you to break you when you betray big brother?
Much Love
Ashley
Oh wow!
What a trip! I hadn't thought of a 1984 framework, but it works. Now that takes it to a different place. Hmmm, I need to reread 1984 ;-)
see you are so brilliant even
see you are so brilliant even your own mind misses ways you are brilliant! HUGS
Much Love
Ashley
Yeah, this is even better,
Yeah, this is even better, love the ending ;) one for the blue boys!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks!
Thanks!
Nice word play :) easy to
Nice word play :) easy to read awesome job
Thank you! I've had very
Thank you! I've had very mixed feeling about this one.