Misspent Time on your Knees

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Flashback Fridays

And when I left you,

with no note,

no notice

that you could see,

did you

just take it

to the alter

for public prayer,

secretly knowing why;

or simply wonder 

where things went wrong, 

which verse you 

didn't here. 

 
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that's better!

whatever was missing in the last two is coming back in this! 


Much Love

Ashley

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;-)

I thought you might like this one! It's got that dark edge to it ;-)

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also...   the title and poem

also...

 

the title and poem work together and play into eachother


Much Love

Ashley

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;-)

whole lot going on that I didn't know if would make the transition.

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:) ain't that always the way!

:)

ain't that always the way!


Much Love

Ashley

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A New One?

and others, amazing! Glad to see you again - Stella


 

 

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:-D

Deeply honored, Lady A! Glad to be able to be back ;-)