Tight Shoes and Loose Thoughts

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Skipping Stones

Hands full of red clay

and dry sand,

quickly, carelessly tossed,

into that empty hole;

eyes and minds,

a thousand other places,

the grieved,

watching clouds,

checking watches

or phones,

simply trying too hard

to be here,

and somewhere else.

 
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running_with_rabbits's picture

really captures our

really captures our in-ability to be with our emotions 

 

<3


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

;-)

or disconnection with meaningful relationships...just a thought, I have no idea what the things I write actually mean...

running_with_rabbits's picture

<3

aren't they one in the same thing? disconnecting emotions and meanignful relationships?


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

More a question of timing as

More a question of timing as I view the disconnect here, but I agree with you on that concept.

running_with_rabbits's picture

... I wonder soemtimes if

... I wonder soemtimes if timing is really what it is or if it's what we hang the blame on...


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

An excellent question! One

An excellent question! One deserving of a good whiskey for proper pondering;-)

running_with_rabbits's picture

oh man

indeed! we should set a time and both have whiskey and ponder and then email each other our insights!


Much Love

Ashley

SSmoothie's picture

Just your average funeral

Just your average funeral full of disassociation. Bad luck,  it's gonna happen to all of us. Great write sir you've captured this formality well! Looking forward to more. ;) hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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;-)

Thank you Dear! Funerals are fascinating to me when viewed at a distance. Now that I have the time and energy, I'm writing again;-)

allets's picture

Funerals

I'm from a small town and funerals are major gatherings - you make it to the wake or the funeral, the house, or the dinner afterwards, always bringing a dish, always sending flowers. And yes. The hole is empty.

 


 

 

Beavis's picture

Thank you, Dear Lady A!

 It's the same here. I only crawl from beneath my rock when required, but I'd rather go to a funeral than a wedding. They always seem more real, more joyous, more fun for those on the periphery. There's a sadness, a forced good humor to weddings and feeling of artifice, while at funerals, everything is naked and real, upbeat or melancholy.

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;-)

and perhaps its limited to my area, but have you noticed that the men, not in boots, all seem to be wearing shoes that no longer fit? The fidget with them more than a second grader who needs to pee! ;-)