It's in where the light lands

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Skipping Stones

Sometimes;

hope 

is formed 

from the soap

that coats 

the rope

from which 

you cling

as the world

twists and swings;

and reality

is the shimmer

you see

on those 

cast off bubbles,

slowly floating

before your eyes.

 
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Sassylass's picture

Living

inthe shimmer twists  sometimes to dimmer.

i Dmit I'm intrigued by this poem

hope may be the bubble but faith is the air surrounding it.

shine on, poet !

Koko~

 


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

Beavis's picture

;-)

Thanks Koko! I love it when I can intrigue someone. This one languished in the notebook for a long time while I debated over it as well. ;-)

running_with_rabbits's picture

:)

I am too happy to let the saddness of this poem sink in, so I have decided that the hope is me becoming a bubble when my hands slip off...


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

:-)

Thank you Dear! I love it when something has to "sink in"! perspective Dear...some see shit, others fertilizer :-)

running_with_rabbits's picture

hehehe other choclate...maybe

hehehe other choclate...maybe we should stops those ones no?


Much Love

Ashley

allets's picture

Poet On A Rope

Hope with reality bubbles extra for emphasis! Nice - as I swing, I slip happily.
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Beavis's picture

;-)

everything always twists and swings, it's what one sees in the shimmer, unless you are into math, then it's all bubbles and strings and such things ;-) Deeply appeciated Dear Lady A!