Did You Care?

It's all I ask for

So I deserve to know

Before you pack up your bags

And get ready to go



I don't really think

You ever really cared

When I wasn't there with you

Or when I was there



You just threw me aside

Like yesterdays news

Hmmmm...should I freak out or play it cool

Those we're my choices and I had to chose



I odviosly played it cool

And acted like I was fine

With the fact that there was someone better

And you didn't want to be mine



I once had a great feeling

One so powerful and strong

I think it was love

This un-natural human bond



But I lost that feeling

Then I was gaining it back

Slowly feeling better about myself

Then boom my heart was cracked




Author's Notes/Comments: 

  Kasi I need to know if you ever cared or if I was right about you just seeing a little bit of Eddie in me....then you saw the real deal and didn't need me.

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ValentineBuchannan's picture

You are amazing... In your

You are amazing... In your own way... Took a long time for me to realize but I think I saw it a bit before... Now I just have to find a way to show it :)


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The dude who wrote the poem's picture

Acctually Ruby part of it was to you. The I once had a feeling...yeah you know the lovy dovy part.

Ruby's picture

At first I thought this was written to me..

the dude who wrote it's picture

Funny...I ask for the one person who always signs my poems to sign this one and answer me and she can't do that for me.

Erika, or Spring Broas's picture

that is rather interesting....[you wrote that on my birthday...lol]

Erika Broas's picture

hmm...and I wrote these on yours