Zero To One Hundred(Thanks)

I first started

When I was back with Jill

working from nothing

To make it up this hill



I had some good times

and some bad

Some super happy

Some super mad



Thank you Eddie

For all your advise

Sometimes it was evil

But sometimes it was nice



Thank you Kasi

You made me see that 98 poems was not enough

You made me hold on

And not give up



Thank you the other

I know thats not your real name

But thanks for reading my poems

And not telling me their lame



Thank you Haley

Sorry it didn't work

But we had some fun

Sorry I was an inconsiderate jerk



Thank you Love Terds

You gave me something to right about

I'm sorry for Nick

That your relationship gave out



Thank you Nick

For pretending like you cared

You gave me someone to talk to

Instead of ripping out my hair



Thank you Megan

For being a bitch

And giving me something to write about

When my feelings for you switched



Thank you Stephanie E.

Sorry for all the trouble

When I was with Jill

And we went through that struggle



Thank you Alex

Your my bestfriend to the end

It's also thanks to you

That I'm writing poems again



Thank you Alyssa

For giving me some love

Some pain, some hatred

And maybe a push and shove



Thank you random people

For signing my shit

Reading it too

...But thats it



Thank you Christine

For one of these writes

Even though you didn't sign it

Don't worry it's alright



Thank you Eminem,Mitch,and Matt

For being my idols

Giving me goals

and my own little style



Odviosly I must thank one person

Her above all else

She got me into poem writing

And basicly made me myself



So I thank you Jill

For all that you have done

Funny how I got here

From starting only at one












Author's Notes/Comments: 

  Thanks Eddie,Kasi,Steph P,Haley,Nick,Megan,Steph Esterline,Alex,Alyssa,random people,Christine,Eminem,Mitch Hedberg,Matt Hardy,and of corse Jillian Carver.  Thank you all very much from the bottom of my heart...I did it.

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Megan Podlaski's picture

Congrats on your 100th poem! From 0-100 im glad I filled some of the gap. Keep writting, your awesome at it.

kasi's picture

thanx i like the poem now i have to find the other one grrr hwy did my computer have to gets sick lol love you

Alexandra Reeves's picture

Congradulations Paulie. :) You are AWESOME!! Remember that. :)

Jillian Camtasia Carver's picture

Dear Paul,
Thank you for thanking me
Thanks for raising me above the rest
Thanks for noticing how through this I really cared
Even though when it came to showing it i wasn't the best

Ok thats my stupid poem to say thanks for thanking me and I'm glad you held on. I told you to make it to a 100 and I'm glad you did..
-Ruby

The Other/EB's picture

It's funny how many people it takes to write a poem. It takes other people to feel happyness, sadness, love, pain, jelosy, and anger. You have tons of people to write poems for about and to, that's really cool and you are really lucky. Congratulations on reaching your goal.