Never Coming Back

  I loved you so much but that meant nothing.  It may have meant something for a short time but now I know there is nothing but neutralness for me in your mind.  I gave you all that I am and for what?  You we're my angel and now your still a friend but it's not the same.  You have become my angelic diablo.  My angel devil.  The fact of the matter is, your never going back, your never changing back, and your never coming back.  I've been told, buildings burn, people die, but true love is forever, but it ends up that I'm the only one who ever really feels...true...love.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

  My first ever non-rhyming poem!!!  I strangly enjoyed writing this.

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ValentineBuchannan's picture

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm....

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm....


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your secret admierer(i think i spelled that rong's picture

hello ..i am so comming back just not rite now...i still love you and theres a place ofr u in my heart ...why do u think im havin so much trouble caring abotu my bboyfriend hmmmm?because i love this lil someone named paul...true love never dies trust me i know and oh you can love more than one person but u love them diffrently ....remeber i luvvvv you ....bigg huggs

The Other/EB's picture

Is this really the first poem ever that hasn't rhymed? wow... anyway it's good it's kind of like a thought in poem form