Version 1.0

This is a new Paul

A whole new me

It's not on the outside

It's something you can't see



I got a new confidence

So now i'll work harder

All thanx to you know who

And our conversation after I called her



I'm doing better in school

No more playing around

If I wanna get of Grosse Ile

I'll have to get both feet on the ground



Two 1 hundred percents

Another chance to take a test

Don't know why but...

This feeling is the best



This is the original me

Before I stopped caring

Started sitting in classes

Not paying attention, just glaring



This is Bonez V.1

You'll see this me for awhile

I think it even changed

My unique thoughts and sense of style



So I might get smarter

That actually might be fun

So come meet the new me

Bonez, version one!


Author's Notes/Comments: 

  I'm v...onnnneuhhhhh!  lol.  My smarts may be to good for yours.  lol.  I'm more smart then you! HAHA  

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Ruby's picture

HEY LOOK! HTe pome I STOLE!.. kidding.. I just took your idea dn pretened to make it my own.. kidding again.. After I wrote it I was like.. "oh.. this sounds like Paul's pome... " so I decided to publish it after three minutes of serious debate and put you in the coments.. nice eh?

The Other/EB/Who The Hell Cares's picture

Yeah I was bord so now I'll comment on this poem... If you are version 1.0 then won't there be like 7 other versions that are not much differant than the first, making them compleatly useless? oh well, irony of the universe...

Eddie Doyle's picture

OK...................we need to talk ............hay your not smarter then me............................................................. lol

Ruby Jo's picture

and Mr. B is all like "RAOR! I"M MORE SMART THAN YOU!" ... and I like that your trying... its good...