This is a new Paul
A whole new me
It's not on the outside
It's something you can't see
I got a new confidence
So now i'll work harder
All thanx to you know who
And our conversation after I called her
I'm doing better in school
No more playing around
If I wanna get of Grosse Ile
I'll have to get both feet on the ground
Two 1 hundred percents
Another chance to take a test
Don't know why but...
This feeling is the best
This is the original me
Before I stopped caring
Started sitting in classes
Not paying attention, just glaring
This is Bonez V.1
You'll see this me for awhile
I think it even changed
My unique thoughts and sense of style
So I might get smarter
That actually might be fun
So come meet the new me
Bonez, version one!
HEY LOOK! HTe pome I STOLE!.. kidding.. I just took your idea dn pretened to make it my own.. kidding again.. After I wrote it I was like.. "oh.. this sounds like Paul's pome... " so I decided to publish it after three minutes of serious debate and put you in the coments.. nice eh?
Yeah I was bord so now I'll comment on this poem... If you are version 1.0 then won't there be like 7 other versions that are not much differant than the first, making them compleatly useless? oh well, irony of the universe...
OK...................we need to talk ............hay your not smarter then me............................................................. lol
and Mr. B is all like "RAOR! I"M MORE SMART THAN YOU!" ... and I like that your trying... its good...