You feel that rush
Running through your spine
It's like falling on your head
All your vision intertwined
Do you feel that pain
Pushing you to the ground
Crushing your body slowly
As you roll, squirming around
Do you feel the love
From this kid wishing he had more
when all he really wants
Are things he had before
Do you feel the darkness
From his shadowed face
Not knowing if he'll win
Or catch those dreams he'll chase
I guess he won't know
But he thinks he really does
Believing his love truly loves him
And she won't stay just a crush
This sounds like a tickle war..
dark slightly frightening its a good poem