Next Lifetime

I find it unbearable 
to   look,
at   times,
   and 
          avert 
       my 
 eyes
despite
 a beauty so fair 
my eyes  
should  not 
contain  nor
      spy .    
Your
         pink foot-prints  
      dance a lovely dance 
 across my grey brain,
   and your scent
      plays chase 
          with my pen.
 
Maybe next lifetime.
 
For in this
  in-credible 
    life that we're in,
      I find it hard 
        to ignore
      If this force that I feel
     Is some time portal 
    back
and your body;  
once mine 
to explore
 
But
   until that day;
   may I bask in the embrace
                 of your 
eyes                                from afar?
                 and 
In
 the
     sanctuary 
                 of 
                   your mind
          do you              long for
                   the    same ? 
I have felt eternitys blue eyes
   tip   toe   up    my    spine.
                     
So              maybe
 ill see you   next lifetime;     
Ive got
 ice 
to chill  
the
 hottest
 and the 
reddest 
of the  
wine
 
 dont be late.
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cathycavalcante's picture

Whew...nicely done here,

Whew...nicely done here, William! Wink

Talk about poetic seduction. lmao!

 


 

Beatnik1979's picture

Was thinking about revising

Was thinking about revising this...

the structure of it...idk 

Destinee1398's picture

This is something I could

This is something I could read over and over again. I have a few times, actually. Its beautiful. I like the choice of words, imagery, and the feeling of wonder it leaves you with.


-Destinee