Shiny chains shiny chains
Chains of
Sister morphine
Going to change
Going to change
Change my
Sister morphine
In your veins
veins
Raging
Sister morphine
Strange
Strange
Stranger
Sister morphine
Shiny chains
That tether
Go insane
And sever
this artery
SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-888660817/60s-rock-improv
Music to accompany...
Just listened. Link came through perfect
unique guitar to accompany your composition. Kudos
Thank you!
ive been trying to get the music on here forever!
i finally figured it out after a long arduous journey of failures.
thanks for checking it out .
i appreciate that tremendously.
I tried to post the music for this
I gues I m not able to, and that’s a drag.
if you want to hear it I’ll email it to you.
Its intense indeed! I like it
Its intense indeed! I like it all but just couldnt let go without saying i want the last lines switched around to:
That tether
Go insane
And this
artery sever
But i also know it works better as u wrote it. Aggh poetry doesnt have to have rhthym and rhymes just one will more than suffice ;) silly me hypocrite that I am lol
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
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Thank you for the read,
I truly value your insight!
It works better with the music, I guess....
im working to convert the audio files
to an acceptable format....but
when I fight technology, technology always wins .
intense
Feeling the chain. The tether. The tightness, just prior to ....
Thanks for the read!glad uo
Thanks for the read!
glad you decided to gi it a chance
Opiate Addiction
is at epidemic proportions. Reviving od's is a city problem too expensive to keep doing. Heroine is back as a drug of choice. Chains indeed.
Indeed. It is as bad now as
Indeed.
It is as bad now as its ever been.....or even worse
Thanks for the read
Blues Lyrics
have changed for the times. From "Oh, yo man done gone" or "I'm gonna leave you with the blues" to the chains of addiction. Interesting, morphine not cocaine or heroin. They demand equal time from the scop. Of course "Cocaine" has already been done quite well. So has "Poppies" I guess.
SoundCloud
if you’re interested and have an extra 2 minutes.
I finally discovered a way to get the music recordings on here.
https://soundcloud.com/user-888660817/60s-rock-improv
Yeah
im glad you dig It.
Its a tough one to like.
I didn’t know where I remembered the sound I heard in my head from When I wrote this..
there should be another song Like that.
Eerie and weird.