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Our first kiss shall be special,

for the beginning of us, it will

mark.  A life I hope we shall

share in wonderful bliss

will begin with our first kiss.

Together, we will be happy,

but first I must confess

how I feel to my fair lady.

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©27 December 2003 - 1:59am — beaconzbard
26 December 2011 - 12:51am — scottjonathan24
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I think this is my favorite

I think this is my favorite one of yours ive read i think.

26 December 2011 - 3:02am — beaconzbard
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Thanks. I normally write

Thanks. I normally write about my faith and/or my struggle with sin. Love poems tend to be the hardest for me to write.

26 December 2011 - 3:55am — SSmoothie
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I do similar only I'm a

I do similar only I'm a little more cheeky and a little more sarcastic sometimes ( mostly humourous) but faith of any kind deserves respect and reverence. This is a lovely poem, and sin is the greatest creative force known to man it motivates people before, after , during and in denial of; and every test is gift if we recognize it for what it is. :)

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."