The sun shines down so bright
My eyes are blinded by the light
The wind blows softly upon my face
When I look at you my dear
I am showered with grace
The boat floats gently down the river
I could stay in this moment with you forever
The sun soon starts to set
The shadows of the buildings
Hide the light just a little bit
Soon the sun is fully gone
But the boat still floats on
The only light that can be seen
Comes from the candles on the edge of the stream
I take a deep breath
And stare at the sky
I push back the hair
From in front of your eyes
There is nothing better than this
I now know what beauty is
Reminds me much of "Moonlight" I appreciate poetry like this.
I think you have some talent here :)