eggshells

Oh the pain
of the precarious
eggshell;
engraving unattractive marks
of resentment
on the bottoms of my
delicate feet.

(All credit on the format change goes to our Beavis; thank you my friend.)

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(All credit on the format change goes to our Beavis; thank you my friend.)

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b4i8islept's picture

delicate feet :)

A very lovely short poem Lisa :)

Beavis's picture

Brilliant!

I love it! I've always been a fan of short poems. When written well, you can condense and distill the entire power and emotion of a novel into a poem. This is pretty damn close! Well done!

SSmoothie's picture

Agreed! Excellent work!

Agreed! Excellent work! Hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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allets's picture

Cool Write

Compact and full - enjoyed slc
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