Oh the pain of the precarious eggshell; engraving unattractive marks of resentment on the bottoms of my delicate feet.
(All credit on the format change goes to our Beavis; thank you my friend.)
A very lovely short poem Lisa :)
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I love it! I've always been a fan of short poems. When written well, you can condense and distill the entire power and emotion of a novel into a poem. This is pretty damn close! Well done!
Agreed! Excellent work! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Compact and full - enjoyed slc .
delicate feet :)
A very lovely short poem Lisa :)
Roger http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B007TX729I
Brilliant!
I love it! I've always been a fan of short poems. When written well, you can condense and distill the entire power and emotion of a novel into a poem. This is pretty damn close! Well done!
Agreed! Excellent work!
Agreed! Excellent work! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Cool Write
Compact and full - enjoyed slc
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