The Amber Witch

She won’t let you go; you have a weakness for her;
She’s deeply satisfying, her embrace like a vise
And she’ll stay with you forever if you let her
In your heart, in your mind, in your soul

When you’re sad, she makes you smile
When you’re lonely, she fills a void
When you’re fragile she makes you strong
At least that’s what you think and I’m jealous of her magic.

I think she’s wicked; the Jezebel Bitch
Her amber fingers caressing you from the inside
I can feel her laughing at me with her crafty grin.
I can’t compete with her sorcery; her super powers.
She’s a part of you, so you’ll most likely ignore me.

If you push her away, she’ll creep though memories
Letting you miss her taste, her touch, her clever hold
And when you want her to come back
She’ll be there; you won’t have to ask her twice.

Do you want to give her up; sever the tie, break the spell?
Do you want her to vanish from your world?
I’m the weaker one; why not just ask me to leave,
Because there’s a possibility you love her more anyway.

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Kikaykit's picture

Cool!

The way you made this so intriguing...:) Luv it when it sounds like a controversial love story but not....:)


Kiks

battlepink's picture

Thank you

Thank you

Beavis's picture

Powerful poem

"I’m the weaker one; why not just ask me to leave,
Because there’s a possibility you love her more anyway."

SSmoothie's picture

Wow! Powerful and rich

Wow! Powerful and rich write!!!

I love these stanzas:

"When you’re sad, she makes you smile
When you’re lonely, she fills a void
When you’re fragile she makes you strong
At least that’s what you think and I’m jealous of her magic.

I think she’s wicked; the Jezebel Bitch
Her amber fingers caressing you from the inside
I can feel her laughing at me with her crafty grin.
I can’t compete with her sorcery; her super powers.
She’s a part of you, so you’ll most likely ignore me."

Wow just wow off to read amber witch 2


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

battlepink's picture

Thank you SS, I just read

Thank you SS, I just read Whisky Tears.....I could read your stuff all day!