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Blinded by beauty
When I first laid my eyes on you I was blinded
Hoping I could finally see the world for its happiness and joy
Even thought we haven't meet each other i know there's something special about you and god knows how I feel about this hoping and praying one day my dreams will come true that I will finally meet you and be the luckiest guy in the world but until that day I will always be blinded to never see past another girl your the one I want your the one I will wait my whole life for you don't know how special you are in this world but one day i will be with you to show you what your on earth for and that promise I will keep until this light is not blinding by your beauty I will be your one and only .
Great poem! I really enjoyed
Great poem!
I really enjoyed your poem! And don't worry you're not the only young one one here, haha, anyway for your first poem that wa great
You can only be as beautiful as you tell yourself you are, but you can't let beauty get to your head.
Nice! keep writing, I look
Nice! keep writing, I look forward to reading more.
Thank you and there will be
Thank you and there will be lots more
Wow! Great poem. Keep
Wow! Great poem. Keep writing!
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Thank you very much and
Thank you very much and always will and always have :)
I really like this! Not sure
I really like this!
Not sure if the lack of line breaks near the end was intentional, but it made it seem so much more..... I don't know, passionate I guess. A since of rushed honesty.
And this is your first poem! O.O!
Welcome to the good life, and you seem to be fitting write in.
Love,
LovingLovelace
If your mirror doesn't find you one of the most beautiful people it has ever seen, punch it and find a better mirror.
Thanks was kinda worried
Thanks was kinda worried about posting it didn't know really how well it was but thanks for your honest thoughts