Lonely

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Death

the only place where i belong seems to be

is in this place called death, or so i'm told

cause right now i'm feelin lonely, can't u see?

that i don't belong here with you, so my soul i sold

i may have one or two friends, they're quite good to me

i think i love one of them, but they don't care

i could just die, they would not see

so it breaks my heart, so here i will share

i'm quite lonely in life, no one hangs out with me

i feel left out of things, why can't you tell?

i'm gonna go chill in my lonely tree

all u see is me,i never show meself out of my calm shell

but all these feelings are inside of this body

they could make u sad with all this emptiness in me

no one notices all this hurt in my soul

so wat do i care wat u see in me

its hard being lonely all ur life

Author's Notes/Comments: 

anyone wanna live my life? willin to give up mine

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Dawn Slater's picture

Sometimes I do see the feelings you try to hide, but sometimes I dont. You dont have to be lonely. When you wrote this it was me that you loved, but I did leave you out and Im sry for that. Sometimes I think Im the reason you store ur feelings inside and not let anyone see them. And If I am then I can understand y u hate me. Rachel is right about one thing in her comment in this poem. I know she will always be there for u if u need her. And I will always be here for u if u need me.

Rachel DiLonardo's picture

good poem.....but it makes me wanna say sniff sniff....u have me and dawn-we're always here for u! i hope you dont feel like this all the time....u cant feel like this all the time....can you?i dunno....but if u need anything, me
-n- dawn are just a phone call away....mwah!!!