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Broken heart

I gave you my heart

You took it

saying you would take care of it

But that was a lie

You took my heart

But instead of taking care of it

You took your big feet

And stomped on it

Now my heart is nothing

Nothing but a bunch of shattered pieces

My heart is broken

I dont know if it is fixable

If I cant ever love again

I had your heart But you ripped it away

Like it meant nothing to me

One day you may love me

The way I love you right now

But your love wont be returned

When that days comes

I will take your heart

And break it like you've broken mine

Then you will understand my pain

And why my love dissapeared

Like it was never there at all



written 2005

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Katherine Johnston's picture

You go girl! I started reading this before I knew that is was actually your poem. It seems I have read several of your poems tonight. I was thinking that the writing style looked like similar to another poem and alas..they where writen by the same person, you!

I liked this poem especially how you turned it around in the end. One very small critique is the spelling of stomped