Golden lights now dance around
Far above, brightening the ground
the people stand with awe face
enjoying the power of your grace
You beauty and love is only the start
of how wonderful you and your grace truly are
the beauty of your fiery heart
help me fight the great dark
So in my words I hide
the identity of my blue eyes
you have my heart, forever yours
the way true love always does endure
Soon one day I'll fade away
as darkness does into day
but you will stand high above
always shining down, spreading your love
it's a very good poem. very well written and if I may, beautiful, the way you put feeling into it.
hiiiiiiiiii...i seriously luv dis poem....ur poem has so much feel