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Never heard
Look to the west and see that star
the one right there, no thats too far
its stands alone, away from the rest
yes thats it, now just take a guess
That star is me just listen in
the tale is short but will eventually end
Just like my life, soon it will fade
just slowly but surely fade away
I have lost the urge, the one that cares
I have lost my reason to even bare
I dont care because im pushed away
to the ends of the earth, with no one to play
I dont know what i have done
but i know that it must really be bad
because im pushed away from people
like a gay from christian friends
So look into my eyes
read deeply every work
i type these words to show
my heart is never heard.
I think you have written a poem here that can mean different things to different people and stir different emotions and thats brilliant. Be careful not to ruin the flow by putting words in that dont necessarily fit just to make it rhyme. You did well with this line: 'That star is me just listen in
the tale is short but will eventually end'
Not solid rhyming but the flow is beautiful x
Terri