Look into my sky-blue eyes
just try to picture my pain
the pain of always trying
and losing it all again
Fight with me to find
a cure for my broken heart
help me onto this path
that i should have never start
Look down the road ahead
and tell me what you see
remind me that you and I
We shall never be
End my life now
Destroy all that is left
because there is nothing good
only deep drowning dread
I now go away
far from any eyes
and bury myself in hiding
away from human eyes
I know fully understand
the truths of deep my heart
the told me that i could love
and would be happy o so far
but in the end i found
the lies of this evil game
I threw away my heart
because of its devilish plan
So now i am alone
as i knew i would be
but this time im all right
because im parted from the sea
I have banished false hopes
I have given into dread
I have lost my heart that hurt me
and stabbed me to no end!!!
I like this one,but think it's a wee bit too long.Keep it up though,it's a good piece of writing.