Open my heart and let it grow
I’ll water it with my blood
Give it light with my soul
Starts out small and tender
Perfect, young, and innocent
Maturing deep within me
It will sprout from my chest
Wild and strong
Basking in its freedom
Its fruit will feed the hungry
Planting a seed in each and every heart
Lying dormant… in wait for love to start
Fruit of My Labor
Outstanding... Such Beautiful Work. Touched By GOD. Stay Blessed.
Thanks:)
Thank you again!
This piece has incredible
This piece has incredible mind imagery and metaphors. I read it a dozen times or more. You are very descriptive and I am impressed far beyond my few words. You made my eyes open wide and heart beat faster reading what you write. Very nice, yes, very, very nice. Thank you
Wow... thank you:)
Quite the compliment!! Thanks so much and I'm glad you liked it! I don't think I deserve this kinda praise, but I still appreciate it:) I'll be sure to stop by your profile and check out some of your poems when I get the chance. By the way, I love you profile picture. It's one of my favorite paintings of medieval depictions.
You are too modest.
You are too modest. Nonetheless, your poetry has "Unique Beauty," as I love Muhammad Algalad myself. My favorite is the: "Rose Fairy." I think you know what I mean? "Poetry is akin to slicing open your wrist and letting it bleed out onto the pages," and it is often not easy, sometimes seeing your emotions drift off like smoke across the Internet. Many times you just want to say - for what? Still, I hope you write more. Peace
Well...
Too modest is better than too proud:) Thanks again, and yeah you’re right, when you put your soul into something, other people can sense it. I try to limit myself to only valuable contributions, which are few and far between. Hope to see more posts from you too though!