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That Is All My Eyes Can See...
I wake up, your angel eyes closed in peace
Your head laying on my chest
I watch you clinging on to me
Your face portrays you in a heavenly dream
Smoothly and with guilt I sit on the bed
Can’t wait to have you on my arms once again
But I have to write all these beautiful scenes
They are my only way to express my being
Because you are the most beautiful piece of art
Michelangelo couldn’t paint it, nor da Vinci
You are the best play ever written
Shakespeare could have never made it
Your body is an angelic sculpture
Your image reflected on a steady stream
The peace that it holds within
That is all my eyes can see…when you’re asleep next to me
That is all my eyes can see....
And I wish this is not just another dream
I can only mesmerize while looking at your eyes, your lips
You are in such a harmonious state
I would never want to wake you up
Because you are the most beautiful piece of art
Michelangelo couldn’t paint it, nor da Vinci
You are the best play ever written
Shakespeare could have never made it
That is all my eyes can see…when you’re asleep next to me
That is all my eyes can see....
I really like this poem. It
I really like this poem. It really cool to read a poem that isn't... cliche
This poem flowed really well even though the word 'nor' threw me off a bit ("nor da Vinci")
You did a great job expressing feelings in a way that is unique. I can't say that enough.
Good job
Thanks for the comment,
Thanks for the comment, always appreciate it. yeah regarding the "nor". The way i felt it, i wrote it. I understand is usually supposed to be used while introducing the second person or thing but it can be used for the first also. in a very unorthodox way, lol.
Thanks though, I didn't even notice until you told me about it. lol
"Banks got bailed out, we got sold out."
Well done! I can feel that!
Well done! I can feel that!
Hey thanks! Trying to wirte
Hey thanks! Trying to wirte the follow up of this one. But getting a little stuck. Anyway ill post it when im done.
"Banks got bailed out, we got sold out."