Patience is a Virtue

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Patience is a Virtue.

She stands strong in a hard time

She is not bold, nor proud.

She makes a soft, yet humbling sound.

Patience is a Virtue.

She will stay from dusk 'til dawn,

Until the end of Earth,

She is not gone.

Patience is a Virtue.

She is considerate, 

Kindness she shows

Why she does it, only God knows.

Patience is a Virtue.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is the first poem I ever wrote. I wrote it when I was in english class at the age of 12. 

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nightlight1220's picture

This is beautiful writing. I

This is beautiful writing. I quite enjoyed this one. Thank you.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Thank you for the kind words!

Thank you for the kind words! Is there any advice you could give me to  improve my writings?

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New Twists On An Old Cliche

Patience is female - of course we are! Loved this small offering. Look forward to more ~~Lady A~~


 

 

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I agree! :D Who better to use

I agree! :D Who better to use than a female? And thank you for the comments, I am wanting to improve my writing as I get older, and these comments are helping me along the way! Thank you!