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Deep down, inside, where only you are found

You know what you did to me

You know how it really was

You know what you really felt

Deep down, inside where only you are found

You know you blame me because it is easier than fixing you

You know who you are

And deep down, inside, where only you are found

You need to live with yourself and all your lies

 

 

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All I have to do is find a way to live with the fact I wish you weren't a liar, and I wish you really did regret your actions and we could work it out.

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©17 October 2010 - 4:44am — running_with_rabbits
7 August 2011 - 10:15pm — nakedsoles
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so good.

so good.

17 August 2012 - 5:31am — running_with_rabbits
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:)

:)

Much Love

Ashley

19 October 2010 - 3:19am — Dizzylemons
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I love how the shortest line

I love how the shortest line follows the longest -

You know you blame me because it is easier than fixing you

You know who you are

It really emphasizes, "You know who you are" And I think thats a good thing, I think its the most powerful line you have in the poem. Good to see you're still working away =) You're not so far off 1,000 poems now!

19 October 2010 - 3:25am — running_with_rabbits
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LOL Time for you to catch up

LOL
Time for you to catch up love! I miss your work :(

Oh and when I hit 1000 poems I turn into a God and conquer postpoems :P

Much Love

Ashley