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Theres a little bit of you in all this
Eeverytime I crash and burn
Love and let leave
Everytime I run
Everytime I fear
Theres a bit of you staring back at me
Getting the best of me
Saying I will fail
I’m not good enough
A piece of you holding me back
Pushing me forward
Theres a little bit of you in all of this
Cutting at my soul
Bleeding me dry
And I hate myself all on my own now

 

 

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"Hurts the same when nobody knows
I guess that's just how it goes
And I won't say anything at all" Say Anything-Marianas Trench

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©28 July 2009 - 9:55am — running_with_rabbits
10 September 2011 - 1:55am — raven_hair
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Hurts the same when nobody knows

I really like this one, for me it's not as simple as to let someone go,leave them, break it off, simply because even if you do they can still influence what you do, how you feel even when they're no longer present or a part of your life. Good one. Lisa M is my old married name so try Lisa Bahe at Facebook.....

26 December 2009 - 10:10am — new_wave_franky
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I really like poetry like this. It is so clever...and so honest. Poetry like this comes from the beauties within the heart. That is the truest poetry of all. But it also tells me something else, as I sort of read between the lines here. It tells me that you are a step ahead of it all. Your high intellectual level of true self discovery is shown here. Your warm wit and artistic way of expressing yourself, it is wonderful. I truly admire your work.

new_wave_franky
December 26, 2009.