Rendered Surrender

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I don't want to go

not today

not with heels heavy

and eyes a tear away



I don't want to know

not even a bit

not with minds racing

and feelings split



I don't want to do this

not ever

not with nothing to lose

and the chance of forever

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Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

"not with nothing to lose
and the chance of forever"

I really liked that. It made the poem for me, before that i wasn't sure how i felt about it and then I saw the end and it made me smile. :)


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