B squared

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2007

 

you think that no one sees it
that you hide it well
but all the space between us
only makes you dwell

you think if you don't look at me
she won't see your lies
you think if you don't talk to me
old feelings won't arise
you think if you can hate me
that you won't try
you think if you ignore me
then I'llsay good-bye

you think that no one sees it
that you can hide your shame
but all this carp is pointless
I am sick of playing this game

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

"like violance, you have me forever and after, like violance you kill me, forever and after" Blink 182

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Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

It's not terrible, but considering the subject matter I think you could have done this a lot better dude. I give it a 4 out of a possible 10


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