there was a time
there was a place
in which I did love without looking
in which I held you
needed to you
made you feel at home
there was a time
there was a moment
in which I desired you without perversion
in which I wanted you, respected you
in which you were a man to my eyes
there was a time
there was a place
which is no longer
I love that you used the word perversion lol i dont remember the last time i saw that word in literature. I know what the poems about so I dont need to ask but I do like the way you put it together and the last line is half decent
Nicole.J.Burgesss