Good Intientions

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2007

 

use me
until there's nothing left
until my heart beats like stone and I'm cold from within
hurt me
until I feel uterly bereft
until my body breaks and you're written on my skin
hate me
until I no longer feel
until I cry from exhaustion and I give up on you forever
love me
until it all becomes sureal
until the blackness opens and I end this endeavor
use me

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

not that you've ever had any

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Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

i'm not sure i liked this one, i'll have to come back and read after the typo's get fixed. on every "until" you have two or three "L's".

I did like the "until my body breaks,and your written on my skin"
that was really good, the written part, how poetic lol


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