Osmosis

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2007

flowers, paved so beautifuly

winter thoughts run dead

still i find you sitting there

deep within my head

a walk, a look, a memory

december come and gone

then there you are like entropy

all pains and probloms withdrawn

like flowers paved so beautifuly

and winter thoguhts run dead

there you are like entropy

locked within my head

Author's Notes/Comments: 

yeah no one will get it, but thats ok

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running_with_rabbits's picture

plus it is shaped like a vase did you not notice?


Much Love

Ashley

Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

Well i may not get it, as you said, but I must say I really liked it, the wording was really well done, "entropy" lol i love it.

"a walk, a look, a memory
december come and gone
then there you are like entropy"

that is definately the part I like best, it kinda rolls off the tougne and sounds right when you read it in your head, oh, i remember you naming this too so hoo ray!!!!


Nicole.J.Burgesss